28: First chapter/short story critique by SUE MOORCROFT

ITEM: Critique by Sue Moorcroft of a first chapter or a short story (up to 5,000 words)

BIO: Sue writes romantic novels of dauntless heroines and irresistible heroes. WANT TO KNOW A SECRET?, ALL THAT MULLARKEY and STARTING OVER are all published by Choc Lit.

Combining that success with her experience as a creative writing tutor, she’s written a ‘how to’ book, Love Writing – How to Make Money From Writing Romantic and Erotic Fiction (Accent Press). Sue also writes short stories, serials, articles and courses, is the head judge for Writers’ Forum and is a past winner of the Katie Fforde Bursary Award.

www.suemoorcroft.com and http://suemoorcroft.wordpress.com